Date: 06/16/15 12:56 am Title: Lazy Summer Days
So I totally wrote this review and thd site ate it or something... weird shit is happening around here.
ANYWAY... Wow! Such a long chapter! I had to read it in parts, lol! I really enjoyed reading it. Your writing has improved along with the story, so I'm super curious to see your next project!
This chapter definitely was a nice wrap up for the story. The vacation, even though it had some not so great moments, really brought the reader and Quatre closer. GREAT JOB!
And congrats on finishing the story! :)
Haha...the site does weird things - well, any site does lol! But I'm still glad I got your review :)
Yeah, it's like one of my longest chapters yet - but everything in it has a relevance to why I put it in...
Awww! I'm glad you think my writing improved! I feel like it's an in between - I looked at some older stuff and I feel like that's better written than the stuff now, but idk....
And I have a lot of projects so look for the updates :)
Oh yes...they may be closer now...but just wait...just wait :)
Date: 01/28/14 04:02 pm Title: Blast Me To Oblivion
So at the beginning of the chapter I was like Yay! Then I was like what the hell and then I was like YAY!!! And then I felt the reader was being selfish. Wow, you certainly got me to experience all sorts of emotions. But overall, I'm glad that reader finally figured out her feelings. Update soon!
Wow, I never thought I could get a reaction out of someone, so that's a surprise....
And no, the reader isn't selfish....that's all I'm gonna say...
Date: 01/28/14 02:48 pm Title: Humor Me
You know the relationship that Quatre and the reader have reminds me of the Fifty Shades of Grey series. A little less intense, but still deliciously wonderful. I'm at work and my manager is walking towards me, so I sooooo have to read the next chapter later. But just know this....I'm drooling right now. Literally, LOL!!!!
OOOKAAYYY......LET'S GET SOME SH*T STRAIGHT....
I have READ....YES I REPEAT READ....the 50 Shades series (and I have them on PDF...so I got them for FREE!!!) and the series LITERALLY SUCKS!!!! At first I thought it was the best thing that happened to me, but nope, my old FB friends who were on the page I used to be admin on, convinced me otherwise. I re-read it and I thought it sucked. And I couldn't agree more with them....and I'm also going to re-read them again to make a blog of all the flaws I found....
So with that in mind....
NEVER compare my stories to that.
Now that I'm done ranting......
I can say that there is a reason my story is going the way it is, but I'm not going to say the reason....you just have to wait for the other chapters...And also if you haven't noticed, I have a thing for lemons, so yeah....
Date: 01/28/14 12:06 am Title: Desperate Thoughts
The ending was so nice, I had to read it twice. Yeah...I went there, lol. This story is getting hotter and hotter with each chapter. Unfortunately my son is waking up and I must stop reading for the night.
I know that feeling of reading twice...it's so awesome!
And I can't help but agree with you....it'll only get flaming hot once I post the next 3 chapters....if I can manage that...I've been so busy with work and school and programming class that it sucks ass...I can't even post my chapters and i can't even write....
it sucks, but at least my stories don't :)
Date: 01/27/14 11:53 pm Title: So Many Questions, So Little Answers...
Oooooooo! Naughty, naughty Quatre! I love this newly erotic side that you have created! His thoughts are just down right sinful. THIS STORY JUST KEEPS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER!!!!
In this story, all the pilots are older...I can say about mid-twenties, so they've come a long way attitude-wise.
I'm glad you like it and I'm also glad I have a 2nd reviewer! :D
Date: 01/27/14 11:31 pm Title: Unpredictable
You know, its sad that I'm just now getting around to reading this story. Quatre is one of my favorite GW pliots and there is not enough of him....anywhere on the web. I look forward to seeing how all of this plays out.
I know!!! When I first got into the series, I was like 'wtf?!?! All of these guys are hot!!' and originally I liked Heero, but I kind of opened up to the other pilots and I wrote this as part of a challenge on another site (which is now gone forever--the site that is :( and my friends and I split it up to where we would all submit a story for each pilot so there wouldn't be repeats, so I got dibs on Quatre to experiment...and it turns out, as I wrote the story, I actually fell in love with his character...he's so easy to write with, but also so hard at the same time...and yes....I have a long list of fics to do of characters that aren't featured much on the web....so if you got any suggestions, feel free to let me know and thanks for reviewing!! :D
Date: 01/02/14 02:00 am Title: Blast Me To Oblivion
I'm sorry for my long overdue review! Holidays are crazy! You really have taken a leap forward wth this story! It's much more an enjoyable read than the first time! Not that that version was bad, but this one is better! I can tell you had a good thought about it plotwise! :)
So... now I'm off to read the preview you sent me! I didn't want to read it before finishing the other chapters first! ^^
It's okay...we're all busy so it's understandable. And I'm flattered by your comment, but enjoyable??? I kind of think it's the same, just more extended and drawn, but if that's what you think then cool :) [I'm my own worst critic as my friend says]
Hope you like the preview!! :D
Date: 12/18/13 12:25 am Title: Unpredictable
Sorry for the late review! I got sick and was out cold for a few days, so to speak. It's nice to read this again! Quatre is being so cute and gentlemanly. ^^
It's all right, as long as you're still reading I'm happy! Yeah, I kind of changed it up a bit, so you'll see it more noted in the next chapters...