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Reviewer: Abigail Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/15 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 1


Reviewer: Dantya Noire Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/13 12:13 am Title: Chapter 1

This is lovely. I've had many qualms about David Cage, but I do appreciate Norman Jayden, both as a character and as a person I wouldn't mind stopping me from getting killed. Your writing of him feels realistic, and I'm so tickled that you've kept him in character so wonderfully.

Just let me love you. Shhh.

Author's Response: You can love me long time, Bianca. Long time. Norman is adorable and tragic in so many ways. He's the only one I cared about in that game. Stole my heart in the first scene. If only I hadn't traded the friggin game in...*cough*

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