Date: 04/03/14 09:04 am Title: 2. Date Mate
Ahahahaha awwww, I feel so bad for the reader, but I can't blame her for having those thoughts. I kinda drift to sleep with Makoto-filled thoughts sometimes. And I mean THOSE thoughts.
But don't worry about boring us, your story is very entertaining so far! And as far as my opinion goes, I think you got Makoto down pretty well.
I also really like how you introduced him and having the thoughts of the reader thinking Makoto was waiting for his model girlfriend and feeling like a salted slug xD mostly because I can relate. I always I feel like a little girl when talking or maybe just blatantly staring.
I love everything! I can't wait until you update! :D
Lol I kinda drift away with those kinda thoughts too lol, only the person changes every night. I was worried about the dirty scenes would become boring before I actually get to write one out >__< Although who gets bored with smut scenes lol? Yes, it's easier on the pride to slink away like a slug instead of being told to move. I'm so happy you like it so far~ your reviews mean a lot <3 T3T So thank you~~!
Date: 04/01/14 10:34 am Title: 1. Fantasy
Just from the summary alone, you have me intrigued. ;)
And when it comes to Haru and anything water, related, I've learned not to question it. So I wouldn't put it past him to go nto a hot tub that hasn't been cleaned in years. Lol I don't know.
This was a great start. And an amusing first impression from Haru! Hahaha.
I can already tell this is going to be fun. ;)
Thank you~ your review make me really happy and inspired to continue this ^__^ Atfirst I was worried my summary wasn't good enough, but after what you said I'm okay with it now. Also I know, Haru seems so shameless when it comes to getting in water. i actually have another scene planned with him that's going to be pretty interesting. I hope you continue to read this~ i plan on updating sometime today b25;
Date: 04/01/14 10:05 am Title: 1. Fantasy
Sorry, I'm a bit too lazy to log in at the moment, and also considering that I'm on a school computer xP
but I really like what you have so far! I'm really not a fan of reading first person POV's, but this was very enjoyable! So, yay! Because it would take a bit to get me to read a first person POV.
Ahaha, I love the reader already. I mean, I probably would have those kinds of thoughts if I was face-to-face with well...not Haru, but Makoto. xD But still. I can't wait until you update! Keep it up!
Ah~ That's fine lol. I hope it didn't destract you from your school work. I'm really honored you reviewed because I love a lot of your stories ^__^ Also i know how you feel, I used to strictly read first person POV but you and a couple other authors on here won me over to second person POV. I hope you continue to read it despite the first person POV, I'll try to make it as enjoyable as possible ^w^ Makoto is coming up next~ as soon as I update it today.