Date: 12/12/14 05:16 pm Title: Empathy
This is so cute!! And Varric at the end, I love it! Xxx
Author's Response: Thanks! ^^ Yeah, I was cheerfully surprised to find Varric was in Inquisition as well. I <3 that guy. Thank you for reviewing! :3
Date: 12/06/14 10:34 am Title: Empathy
I like it!
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad~ Thanks for reviewing~! :D
Date: 12/05/14 12:21 am Title: Empathy
First off, I love this. Cullen is a sweetheart and would definitely say something in that vein to comfort someone. I giggled at Varric spying on them for novel material! So like him.
Secondly, "So you sat, away from the Inquisitions followers; its eyes and kept to yourself until you could find the mask of calm that the people needed to see." The second part of this sentence is confusing. It seems "its eyes" should be on the other side of the semi-colon, at least?
There are a few little typos that can be caught with a read through, but none of it diminishes the story's charm! I can't wait for more Cullen from you. (:
Author's Response: He's a cutie~ I'm glad they kept his shy side intact in inquisition because I've wanted to romance him since he bolted from my Amell mage xD Well Varric aims to misbehave. And meddle. And mess with people. He's a great character to write really xD Yeah, for some reason that sentence worked when I wrote it but looking back it's not quite right. Thanks for the feedback! I'll edit that laterz. :) Cheers! I'm sure I'll write more Cullen in the future. Inquisition is just such a big game and I want to do EVERYTHING. So I've kinda got bogged down. Thanks for the great review! :D