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Reviewer: Passerby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/15 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

The change looks very nice! As a matter of fact, I would like to know if it would be okay with you if I printed the lines. I won't be doing anything with them- just keeping them in a binder of English/Lit stuff.
(Asking permission because I feel I have to.)

Author's Response:

Definitely! Go ahead!

It's actually an honor to know someone liked what I wrote enough to want to print it out. Thank you. 😊

Reviewer: Passerby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/15 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love the poem! Its not corny or whiny, but down-to-earth and uplifting. The only thing I dont kind of like is 'cool' and 'drool'. 'Pool' already rhymes, and... i just dont think 'cool' fits the rest of the poem. Everything else is very good, very insightful and human. Thanks for writing!

Author's Response:

Thanks Sydney. Oh, thanks for pointing that out. I'll definitely be changing that.

And thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate it!

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