Date: 03/12/15 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
The change looks very nice! As a matter of fact, I would like to know if it would be okay with you if I printed the lines. I won't be doing anything with them- just keeping them in a binder of English/Lit stuff.
(Asking permission because I feel I have to.)
Definitely! Go ahead!
It's actually an honor to know someone liked what I wrote enough to want to print it out. Thank you. 😊
Date: 02/26/15 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love the poem! Its not corny or whiny, but down-to-earth and uplifting. The only thing I dont kind of like is 'cool' and 'drool'. 'Pool' already rhymes, and... i just dont think 'cool' fits the rest of the poem. Everything else is very good, very insightful and human. Thanks for writing!
Thanks Sydney. Oh, thanks for pointing that out. I'll definitely be changing that.
And thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate it!