Date: 11/28/15 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 3
More pleaseeeeeeeee? I love this so much! >o
Author's Response: I've got some of chapter 4 sitting on my hard drive so hopefully when I get some time I can come back to this! I just hit a bad patch of writers block :( Thanks for reading so far!
Date: 11/28/15 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
FANTASTIC! Your writing style is wonderful, and yes, ADACHI IS ADORABLE! I always get scolded by my friend when I say I love him, and explains how he's a sex offender that shouldn't be loved, even though he himself lives Adachi. He's a hypocrite ;3
Author's Response: Aw thank you! :D Ahahaha, I admit I have trouble resolving his character in my head. I absolutely loved him as comic relief but then the darker side of his personality comes out and BAM. Suddenly, you want to hate him even though some of the things he says makes sense. Thanks for the awesome review!
Date: 06/12/15 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 3
I swear, there's such a lack of Adachi fics around here. You captured how much of an asshole he is early already. I like that lol. Though I'd rather have Dojima get pissed at me than be under Adachi's control lol. Why do I like this ass of a character. `A`;
Author's Response: I know! I've not found many fics in my travels around the interwebs which is a damn shame. :/ It's probably another reason why I've started writing this one. I've got a massive idea for one in my head that crosses over with P3 but uh... I kinda need to complete P3 and maybe play some arena ultimax so I can get a good timeline sorted out! I'm glad I've got the asshole balance right! :D The entire time I was writing it I was thinking 'Right... so he needs to be an asshole...but not too much of an asshole otherwise it'll make people suspicious.' ^^' It's true, I'd probably prefer Dojima as a boss too xD It's difficult to say what I find interesting about Adachi. I liked the fact he was just derping around the place and driving Dojima insane xD But when the truth came out I was like; "NO D: Y U DO THIS?!" I can relate to him though. Everyone has that bitter side to them that they try to keep hidden. The difference with Adachi is that he let it consume him and went full asshole. IKD, just my ramblngs again. Sorry xD Thanks for the wonderful review Nattie :3
Date: 04/22/15 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
Another wonderful chapter! Now I'm really curious as to how things will unravel!!!
I think you really got his personality figured out! I can totally relate to you: I just spent three years of absolute nightmare studying maths/physics/chemistry, to finally realize that's not where I want to go... I try to tell myself that no knowledge is ever lost, but all that time spent trying to get good grades was really infuriating, so much that I started to believe my grades defined me and that I was only worth the number appearing on my exam. I also bought a Vita just for Golden XD. I hadn't even finished the PS2 version yet, I was just too excited! Though, I don't think I could ever settle for Teddie... Somehow I just see him as the little brother I never had, but no idea why!
Anyway, awesome chapter, I really want to read more! Keep on writing :)! Also, sorry for my own super blab XD!
Author's Response: I'm curious to see where my brain takes this too xD I usually only have vague ideas kicking around in my brain. It's only when I start writing that things take shape the way they do. Like the door thing. That was a spur of the moment choice because the thought amused me. I do? Sweet! I'm toying with the idea for another fic for him but I might hold off until I play Ultimax. Ah, that trio of fun I know well. My degree was in Physics oddly enough. I got annoyed because I spent most of my time trying to actually learn the material when I knew others were coasting by just memorizing. D: In the end, I almost had a full breakdown but still came out with a degree... that I don't use. Sigh. Well, life is just one big learning experience in the end~ I've not completed Golden actually. Only the PS2 one. Golden is better though. Hee, see Teddie just amuses me. He does seem a bit young but I like him more with a younger character. I like writing characters a similar age to Adachi for him. I mean, yeah, he'd probably not care either way but I'd like to think he'd respect someone more who isn't so easily influenced by him and can go toe to toe with him. He'd probably just use and manipulate a younger character. Maybe? I dunno. I'm just speculating. ._.' Thanks for the awesome review and the blab :D It's good to bounce ideas about.
Date: 04/15/15 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
I was really entranced by Adachi's character in persona 4 (maybe because he made me think of myself at some point in my life?), especially in the golden edition, where you could get a Social link with him... So please continue this :)!
I really wish we could play a fem MC in P4 just like in P3P, so we could possibly get more interesting interactions...
Author's Response: He's an interesting character, that's for sure. I mean, yeah, on the level of being screwed over by life I can totally identify with him. I bust my ass getting a degree for four years and it has absolutely nothing to do with what I'm doing now. I've been bitter at not being naturally gifted enough to coast through life. Yet he has that lack of empathy which turns it into a toxic combination. If it doesn't affect him, he doesn't care. He'll toy with peoples emotions because it's entertaining to him. That's why he interests me as a character. I actually played P4 on the PS2 originally and when I heard about the extras in the golden edition... I kinda bought a vita for it. Then discovered P3P. So it all worked out :D Oh yeah, totally. I'd have loved to play a fem MC! I'd have totally gone for him... or Teddie xD I love Teddie. Thanks for the awesome review! Sorry if I went on a super blab there ^^'
Date: 04/11/15 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yess I love Adachi! Thank you~! Of course I want to read more
Author's Response: Awesome! There's something about how utterly clueless he acts that's just adorable. I'm glad I'm not the only person who thought that. Thanks for reviewing~! Hopefully I'll have the next part up soon ;)