Date: 05/02/15 11:39 am Title: Alices' Wonderland
I expected gore, but this is good, too!
Though some of the wording seemed odd to me (I'm picky anyway), I really liked it. I see the reason for your spelling of "Alices'". My favorite stanza is the last. It's so foreboding, yet the word 'whispers' helps to make it also slightly haunting. Thanks for writing, Evil_Angel!
Author's Response: I'm all for gore, but implications of it is always fun. I had a lot of mental arguments over the wording. Still am, so there will probably be a few revisions in the future. I really did enjoy writing the last few stanzas. Thank you so much for the review!!