Date: 12/21/14 09:20 am Title: Chapter 1 - Friend for Life
I really enjoyed this. I may have been long, but I absolutely loved it.
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! ^^ I'm glad that you enjoyed it~ And yeah I probably could've broken it up into a few chapters but that was back when I decided all one-shots needed to be one chapter lol Sorry about that! ^^; But I'm happy you liked it! Thank you!!!
Date: 12/16/13 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Friend for Life
Wow. This was...I'm just speechless since I can't come up with oneword to describe everything....
I'm not into Bleach [or whatever fandom you used], but this was great. Especially with the Spirits and the --whatever they were---they just hunted spirits okay??? Wow...And the whole thing with Kiyu (sp?) and her mom....wow..
And the lemon...ooohh hallelujah!!! It was amazing!!! AAAhhhh!!!!
So yes...really liked the story and where you went with it....I think of it as one really long one-shot since it was 75 pages on Word...My longest one-shot (with lemon) was 16, but I had no plot like yours, it was just smut and all with slight plot, but nothing too big.
Okay...I'm just ranting since I had 2 Rockstars so bear with me....Point.Blank. Love the story and your descriptive writing! :D And btw I found this on the Random Story box on top of the page when I logged into my account to check on my stories... :D
Author's Response: Oh my gosh, you actually read this without knowing the fandom? DX THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! That is seriously the most amazing compliment I could ever receive! I'm so glad that you liked it even though you had no idea what was really going on ^^ Oh that makes me feel so great. And yeah, my one-shots are always huge lol I DON'T KNOW WHYYY. It's just really hard for me to not be detailed I guess X_X And SQUEEEE you loved the lemon too! THANK YOU SO MUCH! I'm still feeling uneasy about my lemons but I'm glad you enjoyed it ^^ Thank you so so much for your amazingly sweet review and thank you for giving my story a chance even though you've never seen Bleach! That is the most wonderful compliment an authoress can ask for -^_^- THANK YOU!!!! *huggle glomp*
Date: 11/14/13 02:59 am Title: Chapter 1 - Friend for Life
Heh heh heh I love long one shots! This was really well written the the progression between the two flowed very naturally. Me likey :3 and teh lemon... Nom! I really need to get back into Bleach now... But yeah, great story!
Author's Response: THANK YOUUUU! That's what's hard for me is the progression...cuz I know my readers want the good stuff but I can't just rush it... That was my main issue with my older stories. It went SUUUPER fast and I was like, THIS IS SO UNNATURALLL D: So thank you for pointing that out; I'm glad it's more believable! :3 AND I'M HAPPY YOU LIKED THE LEMON TOO x3 I'm still paranoid about those as well. I'M PARANOID, CAN YOU TELL??? So thank you for the review...it makes me feel better about myself! Thank you, Sweetie! ^^
Date: 11/12/13 01:21 am Title: Chapter 1 - Friend for Life
Great job! Love your story it was really cute.
Author's Response: Thank youuuu! It's easy when you have sweet guys to work with XD I LOVE ICHIGOOOO!!! I'm happy you enjoyed this story too~ Thanks so much for the review! :3