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Reviewer: Angela1614 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/16 01:14 am Title: Chapter 1 - Reunited

Please update the story!! I love this story so much it's one of the best ones I've ever read. Please I want more chapters!!!

Author's Response: Hooray! I'm happy you enjoyed it :D I'm slowly but surely making my way through the story so fear not! It shall be updated!

Reviewer: Solarwicth Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/22/14 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Pride Lands

I was finishing up the first game when I started thinking....maybe I should read another chapter. I love, love the Pride Rock world, personally I think they should have had it in the first game verses the second. Especially since Sora appears as a young loin cub. I'm glad that Sora and the reader are getting closer even though Sora is still a little clueless about the reader's feelings. Some how I think Donald caught on a while ago, lol.

Author's Response: Oh I'm SO glad you liked the world! Unless do you mean in the game or my chapter? @_@ Lol well regardless, when I started this chapter I was like, mehhhh DX But I'm glad it turned out okay anyway :) Thank you for enjoying it! And yeah, Sora is just so cute with how clueless he is to her feelings lol EVEN DONALD AND GOOFY SEEM TO CATCH ON. That's when you know it's bad ;D Anyway I'm happy you're still enjoying this! Thank you so much for reviewing every chapter. I seriously appreciate it and love your feedback!!! -^^-

Reviewer: Solarwicth Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/14 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Christmas and Halloween Town

I think...or I know that when the reader's past is revealed that its going to be completly the opposite of what I expected. And Oogie Boogie is just a freaking pervert! You would think that he would know better than to mess with Sora by kidnapping the reader. Well thats the way the ball bounces, lol. Can't wait to read the next chapter, I'll probably leave a review tonight night ( late night of course). Still enjoying the story so far. And thank you for getting Halloween Town out of the way, the theme song gets stuck in my headed when I play the game or read about it -_-

Author's Response: Haha! Well I kinda hope it's the opposite of what you expected so it can be a twist~ I'm not so good with twists though so I guess we'll see! Regardless though I hope you'll like it :3 And right?! You'd think after the first trouncing Sora gave Boogie in KH1 that he'd learn his lesson. BUT NOPE. He just likes to get beat up on I guess XD And yeah I totally agree~ Just now when you mentioned the Halloween Town theme I was just like, DOOT. DOOT. DOOT. DO-DO-DOOO~ I do like it though so it's okay XD Hehe thanks for all your reviews! I really appreciate you reviewing every chapter instead of just waiting till the end. I'm guilty of doing that so it makes me happy you are not like that! Thank you for taking the time to review and enjoy my story :3 It means a lot to me~!

Reviewer: Solarwicth Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/14 10:30 am Title: Chapter 4 - Disney Castle

It's always a dream......gosh darnit! With the clueless way Sora is around females, I had a feeling from the beginning that it was a dream. But still, what a dream!! And what drive does Sora enter when he goes all hearltess killer crazy? I stumbled across it a couple times in the game, but could never really figure out how I managed to get that drive. Still can't ^^. Since I'm on a role (lol) I'll start the next chapter!

Author's Response: Yeah when I reread this chapter I'm like, THIS IS SO OBVIOUS IT'S A DREAM but hey, we have to get temporary action from Sora somewhere, right? ;D Hopefully you still liked it! x3 As for his Heartless Sora form, from what I hear it's sort of like a point system. Like anytime you use his Valor or Wisdom forms it's like...+10 or something and Master is +5 and Final +2...or something. Regardless though, when you reach a certain value (which is hidden of course) he turns into the dark form. That's what I tried to get across in the story is with him spamming Valor all the time it's like, WELL THERE YOU GO SORA, LOOK WHAT YOU DID. Still haven't decided if I want his dark form to come out again, but maybe I will. He will still be using his drive forms every now and then after all XD Anyway! Thanks again for your wonderful reviews!!! I hope you'll continue to enjoy this! :D I know I haven't updated in awhile (and it will still be awhile) but I promise PROMISE this will continue! I luffs teh Sora too much to abandon him. x3 Thank you for your vote of confidence! You're so amazing!!! ^^

Reviewer: Solarwicth Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/14 10:04 am Title: Chapter 3 - Olympus Coliseum

I got done reading this chapter last night, however I didn't have time to post a review. Let me make one thing perfectly clear.....I HATE DEMYX in this freaking game. I found him harder to beat then Sephiroth in the first game. Now that we're done with the ranting, on with the rest of the review. And once again your on point with play for play in the game, while at the same time incorporating the reader. I admire your writing capabilities, very talented. Now, on to the next chappie!!!

Author's Response: Awww thank you for taking the time to review even if it was after you read! That seriously makes me feel so good that I have readers dedicated enough to TRY and review even when time won't allow them. DOES THAT ACTUALLY MEAN I'M GOOD?! *dies* Seriously, thank you ^^ AND GODDD you made my stomach drop when you said you hate Demyx lol Do you mean just battling him or do you hate his character? He was pretty hard in this game, especially at Hollow Bastion....where you have like 10 seconds to beat all his water things. I failed at that part, no joke, like 20 times. I was so frustrated!!! But yes hopefully you mean you hate his difficulty and not him as a character, cuz I like him for some reason XD AND THIS STORY WILL GIVE YOU A REASON TO LIKE HIM TOO, JUST GIVE IT TIME. And awwww, thank you so much!!! You really are so sweet... -^^- I'm really so glad you think that I'm talented and you admire my abilities...that makes me feel so good and warm and fuzzy! It's always kind words like that that make writing worth it and make it so much easier to write and continue on :) Thank you so much for your wonderful reviews! :D

Reviewer: Solarwicth Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/14 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 2 - The Land Of Dragons

Sorry that this review comes so late, personal life has been draining. I replay KH2 a lot (since I suck at the first game). I love how you pay attention to every aspect of the game, I can see everything clearly in my head as if I'm playing. And the outfits are super cute! Let's see if I can get another chapter read! I'm super duper excited about this story :)

Author's Response: Oh no worries! I'm seriously thankful you review at all! That really means a lot to me, especially when you're busy! I really appreciate the time you take to let me know what you think :) I've actually only played KH2 once but I do rewatch the vids so I try to make sure my story is pretty accurate with what's going on ^^; (PLUS I LOVE TO OGLE SORA CUZ HE'S JUST SO DAMN ADORABLE). Obviously I have to change some things since I added you/Kyouri as a character so hopefully it's not detrimental at all! AND YAYYY I'm happy you like the outfits! I really wish I was better at drawing because I totally want to draw all of Kyouri's outfits that I have in mind. Maybe I will someday...who knows. Gotta practice ^^; But anyway I'm so glad you're enjoying this still! THAT MAKES ME SO EXCITED TO KNOW THAT SOMEONE ACTUALLY ENJOYS THISSS!!! Thank you so much! ^^

Reviewer: Solarwicth Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/14 10:05 am Title: Chapter 1 - Reunited

I swear, I'm so late with reading certain stories (like this one) its not even funny. I love Kingdom Heart and especially stories pertaining to our dearly loveable hero Sora. It will be interesting to see how the reader and Sora's relationship will develop. Especially since Kairi has always been someone close to Sora's heart. On to the next chapter!!!!

Author's Response: Awwwww thank you so much!!! And yeah I know! There are so few stories with Sora out there, it's sad :( I mean I like Roxas and Riku but I personally like Sora the most ^^ I'm glad you're enjoying my story though! It's on a very temporary hiatus right now but very soon I'll be updating like crazy until I finish :3 So please be patient with me! ^^ Thank you so much for taking the time to review! I hope you'll continue to enjoy this! :D And we'll just have to see how Kairi plays into all of this~ Hopefully you won't hate me! ^^;

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